The maps below show changes that occured to a town named Willington in 1780, 1860 and 2000.
The maps below illustrate how a
town
named Willington changed in 1780, 1860 and 2000.
From an overall
perspective, the town
experienced significant development and modernization with new
system road, a lot of residential and education facilities with commercial Correct article usage
a new
center
replacing Change the spelling
centre
green
system and old Add an article
the green
agricultural
.
In 1780, to Replace the word
agriculture
east
of the Add an article
the east
river
lied
Replace the word
lay
few
farms and Correct article usage
a few
woods
. There were also
100 homes
and villages
near the river
.
In 1860, the town
had changed considerably compare
to 1780. On the east side of the Change the form of the verb
compared
river
, the
road was built leading the Correct article usage
a
villages
. The woods
were chopped down a little and the farms were demolished to construct more 100
Change preposition
than 100
homes
and more villages
. The bridge also
was built to cross the river
easily.
By 2000, the town
had many changes. The vacant land was expanded because
the disappearance of the farms and Add the preposition
because of
woods
. Besides
, the schools and sports fields were built and replaced woods
. Fix the agreement mistake
wood
Homes
and villages
increased and road
was built Correct article usage
a road
crossed by
500 Verb problem
across
homes
. On the east side of the river
, there were shops which lied
opposite the schools and sports fields. South of the Replace the word
lay
the
shops, Remove the redundancy
apply
the
wetland for birds was erected to get water in Correct article usage
a
river
to moisten the soil for birds.Add an article
the river
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Vocabulary: Replace the words town, river, woods, homes, villages with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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