The chart shows the average number of hours each day that Chinese, American, Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent doing leisure activities while on holiday in Greece in August 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The bar chart provides information on the number of
hours
spent by visitors from four different countries on their activities during their vacation in Greece in 2019.
Overall
, Chinese
and American tourist
seemed to Fix the agreement mistake
tourists
spent
most of their Change the verb
spend
time
to read
a book, Change the verb form
reading
while
Turkish and Brazilian visitors enjoyed more time
at the beach.
Among three activities that can be done during vacation in Greece, Chinese
people are spoiled
themselves with reading book Wrong verb form
spoil
activity
for eight Fix the agreement mistake
activities
hours
long
, Rephrase
apply
while
the rest of the tourist
only stand for below than six Fix the agreement mistake
tourists
hours
, with both Turkish and Brazilian visitors shared
the same amount of Wrong verb form
sharing
time
. Conversely
when it comes to spending Add a comma
Conversely,
time
on the beach, Brazilians took a longer time
for
six Change preposition
apply
hours
long, meanwhile the rest of the group cannot
stand longer than five Wrong verb form
could not
hours
, and surprisingly Chinese
people did not use to wasting time
on beach
.
Add an article
the beach
Furthermore
, American and Turkish people turn out to share the same activity during holiday
as they are equally devoting three Fix the agreement mistake
holidays
hours
per day to visiting locations in Greece, which surprisingly not
favoured enough among the rest of the group especially Add a missing verb
is not
Chinese
folks that
only spare one hour per day to do that activity.Correct pronoun usage
who
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, chinese, time with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "stand" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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