The graph shows data about the annual earnings of three bakeries in Calgary, 2000-2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows data about the annual earnings of three bakeries in Calgary, 2000-2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph compares the yearly
income
of three bakeshops in Calgary in
dollars
from 2000 to 2010. Looking from an
overall
perspective, the “Amandine Bakery” and “Bolo Cakery” show a similar upward trend,
whereas
“Mari Bakeshop” decreased with fluctuation during the calculated period. By 2010, “Amandine Bakery” became the most popular bakery in the city. As can be seen from the graph, “Mari Bakery” was the one whose
income
was the greatest among others, approximately 80000
dollars
, in 2000. In 2001, its revenue increased by almost 15000
dollars
. Next four
years
the data varied between 95000
dollars
and 80000.
Then
the sales plunged to 60000
dollars
,
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and fluctuated slightly till 2007. By 2008 the rate of
income
dropped again by just over 20000dollars. In the period of time from 2008 to 2010 the
income
fell steadily and reached a low of 40000
dollars
.
On the other hand
, “Amandine Bakery” earnings
leveled
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off at around 57000
dollars
for five
years
,
however
“Bolo Cakery” production sales had an upward trend for the first four
years
and
then
remained the same for 40000 for two
years
. For the latter five
years
the purchases from “Amandine Bakery” and “Bolo Cakery” rocketed by 1.5 times showing
income
around 101000 and 63000
dollars
, respectively.
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