The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010.
These two maps show changes in a small
village
called Stokeford between 1930 and 2010.
In the 1930s, the village
consisted of a lot of farmland and a small number of houses. There was also
a primary school located near the road and two shops opposite this
school, to the left of the post office.
In 2010 the village
has changed: there are more houses now than there were in 1930. The gardens have been replaced by a Retirement Home, the farmlands and shops had
been removed, and the primary school Wrong verb form
have
was
expanded slightly. The post office, located almost in the Wrong verb form
has been
center
of the Change the spelling
centre
village
, and the bridge across the river, in the north, remained unchanged. The road was not particularly changed; an intersection was added opposite the Retirement home.Submitted by acaitaz on
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