Experts say older people were happier and healthier in the past because they did more excercise and spend more time with their family and friends whereas now many suffer loneliness and health problems.What are the causes o this and what are some solutions
Nowadays, loneliness and health
issues
are common phenomena which were different in the past. This
essay will suggest the principal causes of these issues
and submit some government awareness
programs as viable solutions, followed by a reasoned conclusion.
The main cause of the health issues
is nothing but poor diet
. At present, most people
live on junk foods which has a very bad impact on the human body. Furthermore
, alcohol and drugs have no restrictions in most countries. Specifically, many European countries have withdrawn the ban on weeds. If I talk about junk food, there is a good example
, such
as the "WALE" movie. It draws the viewer's attention, especially to the obesity level of the mass people
in the giant spaceship who don't work but only take junk foods and enjoy entertainment on the display in front of them. Moreover
, young and middle-aged people
love to hang out with friends rather than family. Cafeterias, bars, pubs, tea shops etc are visible in every corner of the road. In addition
, family members are always busy on their smartphones at home which makes them more lonelier. For
example
, the movie "Eye Shoot" demonstrated the result of spending most of the time on the Internet. Similarly
, couples don't want to have a baby because of increasing expenses and lack of awareness
, which make them purposeless in old age.
For the possible causes of these issues
, a massive government-sponsored awareness
campaign will be effective regarding the "dangers of poor diet
". These will lead the people
to healthier food habits. For
example
, the Indian government already has launched several programs on diet
awareness
. Similarly
, such
kind of campaign will also
help the couple to understand the need to have a baby, also
government can provide incentives for having every child. For
example
, Italy announced such
kind of program last
year in 2022.
In conclusion, the current health crisis has been caused by an unhealthy diet
and a lack of awareness
. Likewise
, loneliness has been affected by the bad use of technology and lack of awareness
. States should take care of these issues
by initiating some big programs.Submitted by tanvir0507 on
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