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Computer today can quickly and accurately languages . therefore, it is a save the time . To what extent do you agree or not ?

#computer #languages #save #time
The computer is
one
 of the best technologies which offers many facilities to people to learn languages in efficient and correct ways in order to save time. I strongly agree with
this
 statement.
Firstly
, there are many advantages of learning languages through computers. There are various applications to help us improve our language skills with sample sentences in specific words, and not only that, but it
also
 shows us how to pronounce them correctly.
For instance
, Google Translate is
one
 of the applications from Google Chrome websites that allow us to get accurate translations.
Hence
, we are able to understand the context and learn
one
 word with a different meaning precisely.
Furthermore
, the use of technology allows people to learn and connect with other nations. It is shown that it is more comfortable to learn dialect using digital devices, Duolingo,
for example
. Once we downloaded and subscribed, we could fully access trough device to learn many languages in
one
 hand.
Hence
, it will make us more confident to interact with people living in other countries. In conclusion, computers have a multitude of benefits to meet our language needs.
This
 equipment can save much time in order to make our life easier and faster.
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task achievement
You addressed the task only partially; the essay includes some relevant information and ideas, but you need to develop your arguments more fully. Be sure to explore both sides of the argument if the question requires a discussion of 'to what extent' you agree or disagree.
coherence cohesion
While the essay has an introduction and conclusion, the ideas were not fully elaborated, and the argument lacks a clear progression. Work on ensuring that each paragraph logically follows from the one before, with clear topic sentences that delineate the main idea for that paragraph.
task achievement
In terms of task achievement, your response is somewhat generic and lacks depth. The use of specific examples is good, but they need to be more relevant and clearly connected to the points being made. Ensure that the examples provided are directly linked to supporting your argument.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

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