The chart below shows the number of three types of visitor to a museum between 1997 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart reveals the amounts of museum
visitors
divided into three categories (adult visitors
, visitors
aged under 15, and special exhibition visitors
) from 1997 to 2012.
Overall
, the most notable trend is that adults became the majority of the guests
over the periods, and had fluctuated. While
young visitors
experienced a downward trend throughout the entire period, special exhibitions
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exhibition
guests
on the contrary
.
Looking at the chart in detail, the mature visitors
started with just over 300 thousand
in 1997,
and increased slightly to about 2,100 in the next five years. Remove the comma
apply
Next,
in 2007, the adult guests
reached a peak point at just above 400 thousand
, then
notably declined to 380 thousand
in 2012.
Furthermore
, in 1997, The number of visitors
under the age of 15 was 120 thousand
, while
the number of guests
attending special exhibitions was 28 thousand
. Then
, young visitors
gradually decreased until the last
years (2012) and stood at approximately 82 thousand
. Different from young guests
, special exhibition visitors
had a small rise through the period and levelled out at 42 thousand
. In addition
, the total number of visitors
throughout the period was about 1,918,800.Submitted by zzahrinaamalia on
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