The graph below gives information about the price of bananas in four countries between 1994 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisions where relevant.
The line graph above shows the
price
of bananas (counted per kilogram in US$) from Japan
, France, Germany and the USA from 1996 to 2004.
Overall
, it can be seen that Japan
had the highest banana price
per kilogram, while
the USA remained as
the country with the cheapest Change preposition
apply
price
of this
fruit.
In 1996, 1 kilogram of banana in Japan
was valued at US$2. The price
of this
fruit was raised by 50% in 1997 to US$3, before returned back to original
Correct pronoun usage
its original
price
in 1998. Between 4 years (1999-2002) the price
were fluctuating
Wrong verb form
fluctuated
around
US$2 to US$2.5 and Change preposition
from around
then
recorded its lowest price
of US$1.5 in 2003, before rocketed
back to US$2.5 in 2004. Wrong verb form
rocketing
This
fluctuative
Correct your spelling
fluctuating
fluctuation
price
situation also
happened in France and in the
Germany, even though Correct article usage
apply
market
Add an article
the market
price
was still below Japan
.
On the contrary
, the market situation in the USA was totally different compare
to the other three countries. The Change the form of the verb
compared
price
of Banana
in Fix the agreement mistake
bananas
this
region was quite stable, with only around US$0.2 price
increased
from the period given.Replace the word
increase
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Vocabulary: Replace the words price, japan with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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