The pie charts show the electricity generated in Germany and France from all sources and renewable in the year 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts show the electricity generated in Germany and France from all sources and renewable in the year 2009. 

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided diagrams present the source of power generation in
Germany
and
France
, and its renewable details, in 2009.
Overall
, the first 2 pies show that,
while
both
Germany
and
France
have the same 3 sources of electricity power, which are nuclear, conventional thermal, and
renewables
, but in different ratio. The next 2 pies illustrates the detail on portions of
renewables
energy sources from each country, which share the likeness of not using geothermal, but utilize the other 4 sources: biomass, wind, hydroelectric, and solar; in different percentage too. In 2009,
Germany
produced 560 billion kWh energy, which almost 60% of it came from conventional thermal (59.6%). The other 40% of slice were generated from nuclear (23%) and
renewables
(17.4%). Within the same year,
France
transformed 50 billion kWh shy from
Germany
at 510 billion kWh.
In contrast
to the deutchland,
France
used the nuclear to create more than three quarter of its electricity (76%).
Furthermore
,
France
utilized lesser portions of
renewables
(13.7%) and conventional thermal (10.3%). From
renewables
sides,
Germany
mostly took advantage of biomass and wind, respectively 39.3% and 36.9%, which were far higher than the other twos: hydroelectric (17.7%) and solar (6.1%). Different to that, hydroelectric contributed to the majority of
France
's
renewables
energy source at 80.5%, with the
last
19.5% were coming from wind (10.5%), biomass (8.1%), and solar (0.9%).
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words germany, france, renewables with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • generation
  • renewable sources
  • non-renewable sources
  • fossil fuels
  • nuclear energy
  • output levels
  • break down
  • hydroelectric
  • biomass
  • reliance
  • significant differences
  • unexpected findings
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