Some people think that housing facilities should be built in the vacant areas of cities and towns, while others believe that parks should be set instead. Planting trees is very important for the environment. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is thought by some that if there is an empty

space

in the

city

, housing should be built there,

while

others argue that, rather than using

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it for housing areas, building a park will bring a plethora of benefits since it is essential for the environment. I do believe that providing public gardens is indispensable

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for

of

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two reasons:

cities

need green

space

and building more housing in the

city

will account for

unhealthy

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life

. The fact that

cities

need more green

space

is inevitable as there is insufficient

of

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fresh

air

. It happens because there

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is a lot of

pollutions

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pollution

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from factories, cars, motorcycles, and greenhouse house effects. It is getting worse since the number of trees is really low in the

city

. If there

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more green

space

in

cities

, the

quality

of

air

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would be better because trees produce O2( oxygen) and absorb the pollution. So, comparing compared with using a

space

for housing, the benefit

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of building parks counts even more. It is known by the public that towns have a high number of housing

such

as apartments, so allocating a

space

for new housing will put a strain

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on the

quality

of human

life

as the environment is getting

worst

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worse. Some damaging effects

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of the high number of housing in

cities

,

such

as insufficient fresh

air

, lack of fresh water, and temperature improvement, lead to

low

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quality

of

life

, thereby people will be

difficult

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unable to drink clean water, to

breath

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with

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fresh

air

. As it runs, most citizens will be really prone to getting some illnesses related

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to

breathing

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system and

disgestion

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digestion

. In conclusion, since having more trees is crucial for a

city

to have a better

quality

of

life

, the usage of vacant areas in the

city

must be considered

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the benefit

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of humans. So, providing more gardens or parks

will

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would be useful rather than building housing in an empty

space

in

cities

.