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The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 to 2019.

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 to 2019.
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The two charts
inticate
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indicate
intricate
 the figure of time
spend
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 doing housework in families in terms of the transformation in ownership of electrical
appliance
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appliances
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 - the washing machine, the
refrigerator
, and the
vacuum
 cleaner - in one region from 1920 to 2019.
Overall
, the
precentage
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percentage
 of households with
eletrical
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electrical
 appliances all increased.
In contrast
, the number of hours of doing housework declined generally. In 1920, the amount of households with electrical devices - the washing
mechine
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machine
, the
refrigerator
, and the
vacuum
 cleaner - were about 40%, almost zero
persent
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per cent
present
, and 30% respectively. In 1960, it can be seen a dramatic increase in
refrigerator
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refrigerators
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, the
poportion
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proportion
 of
housholds
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households
 of the remaining devices rose gradually. Between 1960 and 1980, the portions of
the
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refrigerator
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refrigerators
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 and
the
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vacuum
cleaner
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cleaners
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 grew rapidly
while
 the figure of
housholds
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households
 with washing
machine
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machines
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 declined slightly. After 1980, the
poportion
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proportion
 of households with all
devices
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the devices
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 increased
stabily
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steadily
. In 2019, the number of
housholds
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households
 of
these three appliance
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this three appliance
these three appliances
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 (the washing machine, the
refrigerator
, and the
vacuum
 cleaner) were at approximately 15%, 100%,
100
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and 100
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% respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words refrigerator, vacuum with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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