The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children’s charity located in the USA spent and received in one year,2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given chart illustrates the sum of money that a youngsters' charity in the United

Stated

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expent

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spent

and granted in 2016.

Overall

it is clear that

there is no significant gap between the total received and the total spent.

Additionally

, most of the money used was for program services and most money obtained was from donated food. Regarding the chart for spending, program services for the highest percentage of 95.8%. Following are Fundraising and Management and General which saw the least amount by 2.6% and 1.8%, respectively.

In addition

, the total amount of expenditure is $53,224,896. As is shown in the chart, the sum of donations received was $53,561,580. The majority comes from donated food, which is 86%. Following are community contributions,10.4%, and program revenue, 2.2%. The

remainings

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are other income from Investment and Government Grants, which saw the same amount of 0.2%.

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