The charts below show Australian dollars in Australia’s trade in three nations from 2004 to 2009 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The charts below show Australian dollars in Australia’s trade in three nations from 2004 to 2009

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The three line graphs depict
australian
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dollars in
import
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imports
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and exports in three different countries ( China, Japan and
USA
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the USA
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) from 2004 to 2009.
Overall
, the import levels were quite similar in all three examples, unlike exports that varied
according to
the country. in 2004 the
Australian
dollar for import trading was around A$20
billion
for every country.
This
data remained quite stable over the years for Japan and the United States
in contrast
, it slightly rose for China, reaching just under A$30
billion
in 2009. Looking at
exporting
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, even in
this
case
australian
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dollars
expierienced
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steady growth in China, starting from a value of just over A$20
billion
in 2004 and ending with around A$40
billion
in 2009.
Australian's
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export with Japan experienced a less steady rise; in 2004 the
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dollar value was A$20
billion
, it reached its peak in 2008 with A$40
billion
but in 2009 decreased to around A$30
billion
. For the USA, exports remained around A$10
billion
throughout the years, with some slight falls and ascents.
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  • trade surplus
  • trade deficit
  • bilateral trade
  • exports
  • imports
  • economic relationship
  • year-on-year growth
  • trade volume
  • upward trend
  • downward trend
  • fluctuations
  • peak
  • trough
  • stagnation
  • commodities
  • market forces
  • import/export ratio
  • financial quarter
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