The bar charts show the percentages of film release and ticket sales in 1996 and 2006 (romance, drama, comedy, fantasy)

The charts give information about the percentages of how many

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with different genres and

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were released and sold respectively in two given periods. At a glance, it is noticeable that three of the genres (drama, comedy, and fantasy) experienced a rise in both

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debut and

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one. In terms of the

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industry generated about 28% of drama genre, 20% of comedy, and around 12% of fantasy, consecutively in the initial year.

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ratio started to grow in the next four years. Contrariwise, the fragment of romance

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was the lowest and remained stable in both years. In regard to the selling, comedy

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was the top preference in 1996 and 2000, which accounted for 20% and approximately 22%, respectively. The second and third positions were drama and fantasy, which obviously saw an

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in those periods.

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to romance which comprised 5% of the sale but suddenly fell to about 2%.