The line graph gives data about people who asks to gain information at the tourist offices from January to June in UK.
The line graph illustrates that
people
who enquiry to get details from the tourist office in three different ways such
as in person, by the
letter/email and by telephone in six months from January to June in Correct article usage
apply
UK
.
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the UK
Overall
, people
have
more Verb problem
are
comforatble
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comfortable
to get
all details about the tourism by telephone as compared to other ways.
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getting
According to
the graph shows that people
who asks
by telephone is 900 in Change the verb form
ask
january
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January
then
slightly reduce
in the next Wrong verb form
reduced
month
by 800, after that in march
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March
month
it grows slightly and achieved
1000, surprisingly from Wrong verb form
achieves
march
to Capitalize word
March
april
, it has stable and the next two months it increases gradually from 1000 to 1600. Change the capitalization
April
People
who asks
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ask
by
in person, January Change preposition
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month
only 400, after two months gradual growth which is from 400 to 800 but from march
to Capitalize word
March
june
it increases drastically from 800 to 1800.
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June
In contrast
, folks are
get details by letter in Unnecessary verb
apply
first
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the first
month
around 750 then
it has
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fluctation
until Correct your spelling
fluctuation
fluctuations
may
which is 200 Capitalize the word
May
then
from may
to Capitalize the word
May
june
has Change the capitalization
June
satble
which is 200.Correct your spelling
stable
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