The pie charts show the average household expenditures in Japan and Malaysia in the year 2010.
The pie charts illustrate the average household spending in two different countries, namely
Japan
and Use synonyms
Malaysia
, in the period from January to December 2010.
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Overall
, it is clear from the charts that healthcare expenditure made up the lowest percentage. Linking Words
However
, people in the two nations spent most of their money on housing, food, and other goods and services.
In Linking Words
Malaysia
, housing expenditures occupied the highest proportion of total expenditures, at 34%, Use synonyms
while
in Linking Words
Japan
, that figure was 21%. Use synonyms
Japan
had the highest percentage of expenditure on other goods and services at 29%, higher than that Use synonyms
in
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of
Malaysia
, Use synonyms
just
under a quarter. The rate of money spent on food in Change preposition
by just
Malaysia
ranked second among all categories, with 27%, Use synonyms
while
that figure in Linking Words
Japan
stood at 24%.
It is interesting to note that the proportion of transport in Use synonyms
Japan
was twice as high as in Use synonyms
Malaysia
. Healthcare expenditure accounted for 3% and 6% in both nations, which was the lowest number on the charts.Use synonyms
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