Write about the following topic: Some people believe that they should be able to keep all the money they earn, and should not have to pay tax to the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
There are opinions in society arguing that workers should not be taxed at all and get to save all the earned money for themself.
However
, I didn't conform to this
idea.
In many countries, tax
is still the main source of income
for the government and with this
tax
, the government can run all of its functions, such
as building infrastructure, providing education and healthcare, paying for civil servants, maintaining security and many more. Without adequate funding, the state will run into chaos which in turn can spiral into failed
state. Add an article
a failed
Venezuela
is a good example of this
, at one time Venezuela
was abundant in oil
, and with
the rising price of Change preposition
apply
oil
, gave Venezuela
a lot of devisa
from Correct your spelling
device
oil
export. Instead
of taxing the sales of their oil
, Venezuela
had cut many taxes and gives
its citizens many unnecessary subsidies, Wrong verb form
given
such
as free petrol. Now, after Venezuela
started running out of oil
and oil
prices are no longer as high as it was, this
country now struggling to pay for its daily necessities.
Looking further
, tax
also
a tool for countries to redistribute the Add a missing verb
is also
income
among their citizens. To balance income
disparity between the rich and the poor. This
can be done by applying higher tax
tariffs on the wealthy person while
giving low or even zero tax
for people
with low income
. The money gathered from the tax
of wealthy people
then
can be used to pay for health subsidies and education costs for poor people
. An example of this
can be seen in Indonesia, in Indonesia a person with an annual income
of 5 Billion Rupiah can be taxed up to 35% of their income
, while
people
with an annual income
of 60 Million rupiahs are not taxed at all.
In conclusion, tax
is still important for countries as the source of funding to run a well-functioning state, and also
create welfare for its citizens.Submitted by qmousenv on
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