The flow chart below shows the process of waste paper recycling:
The figure illustrates the
process
used in the world to recycle all the paper
that is
thrown.
There are six stages in the process
, beginning with the collection of waste paper
. This
paper
is then
sorted by hand, transported, cleaned, de-inked and finally
manufactured so it can be ordinary paper
.
Looking at the three first stages, there are three steps before the real transformation. Firstly
, all the writing papers from business or public paper
banks are collected. Then
, all the unsuitable paper
is removed before being transported and being
delivered to the Unnecessary verb
apply
paper
mill.
At the fourth step of the process
, the transformation process
starts, cleaning, at the beginning, the writing paper
so they can then
remove the glutes and inks. After that, the paper
can already be manufactured and become useful for society.Submitted by santos_dij on
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