The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbours. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter 1)Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly 2)Explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours 3)Suggest what should be done about the problem Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses Begin your letter as follows Dear Sir,
Dear Sir
I am
resident
of sector 21 Correct article usage
a resident
panchkula
and want to bring Change the capitalization
Panchkula
into
your awareness and complain about the non-function community Change preposition
to
garbage
bin
which has become a headache for our residents. The garbage
bin
's window slider system is not working properly and as a result
, we are facing difficulty to
Change preposition
in disposing
dispose
our household waste.
Add the preposition
dispose of
To begin
with, people need to exert a lot of force to open the waste container. This
has resulted in a major inconvenience for our elderly residents due to
their physical limitations..
Not only Replace the punctuation
.
...
this
, Mr. Sham, my neighbour, has injured his shoulder while
putting excessive effort to slide
the side door to open the Change preposition
into sliding
garbage
bin
. Consequently
, people have started throwing their waste near the bin
, causing bad smell
and excessive flies and mosquitos to breed, which, in turn, Fix the agreement mistake
smells
posing
many health risks, Wrong verb form
poses
such
as malaria and dengue diseases.
Considering the aforementioned reasons, I suggest to replace
Change the verb form
replacing
existing
Correct article usage
the existing
garbage
container with a new one
I would also
advice
Replace the word
advise
to
thoroughly examine for any development of rust so that we do not face the same problem again. Correct pronoun usage
you to
Additionally
, it is important to remove the garbage
that is
accumulated near the bin
in order to prevent breeding
of malicious insects.
Your cooperation in Add an article
the breeding
this
matter will be highly appreciated. I am looking forward to see
how much suggestions Change the verb form
seeing
translates
into Change the verb form
translate
a
swift action from your side given the gravity of Correct article usage
apply
situation
.
Yours sincerely
RohitAdd an article
the situation
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Coherence and Cohesion
Ensure that there is a clear introduction, body, and conclusion to your letter.
Coherence and Cohesion
Use a range of cohesive devices (such as 'firstly', 'moreover', 'therefore') to structure your arguments clearly.
Task Achievement
Try to maintain a more formal tone by avoiding contractions (e.g., use 'cannot' instead of 'can't', and 'will not' instead of 'won't').
Task Achievement
Provide a wider range of solutions to demonstrate your ability to address the issue comprehensively.
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