The pie graphs show the nutritional consistency of two dinners. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data. You should write at least 150 words.

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Describe the data for

university

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the university

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lecture

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lectures

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write down the given pie graphs

show

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showing

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the nutritional consistency of two dinners.

Overalll

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Overall

, the graph illustrates

about

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apply

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the

Medium

Baked

Potato

and Macaroni which consists of

carbohydrates

, Protein,

Glucose

percentage

, Saturated fat and other

nutrients

To begin

with,

Medium

Baked

Potato

which have

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has

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five ingredients

firstly

Carbohydrates

which

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major

of 35 per

cent

secondly

protein which is the second largest

percentage

of 25

per

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per cent per cent

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cent

thirdly

Glucose

as its

percentage

of 15, Saturated fat 10 per

cent

and Other

Nutrients

percentage

. On

otherside

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the other hand

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, Macaroni which as

carbohydrates

which

Correct word choice

apply

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is 52 per

cent

, Protein as its 11 per

cent

and

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apply

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Glucose

also

as its 11 per

cent

, Other

nutrients

as its 5

percentage

and

finally

Saturated fat

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21 per

cent

Comparitively

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Comparatively

, after analysing

the

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apply

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both

Carbohydrates

its

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their

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large

Glucose

as its 15 per

cent

Medium

Baked

Potato

and

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apply

show examples

Macaroni as its 11 per

cent

and

nutrients

as its high in

Medium

Baked

Potato

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words medium, potato, carbohydrates, glucose, percentage, nutrients, share, cent with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "data" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "graphs" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.

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6Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
16Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

174 words

6.50

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

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Complete response

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Topic Vocabulary:

nutritional consistency
carbohydrates
proteins
fats
vitamins
minerals
fiber
proportion
component
pie graph
comparison
significant
balance
healthy
dietary choices
implications
absent
presence
macro-nutrients
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