The pie graphs show the nutritional consistency of two dinners. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data. You should write at least 150 words.
Describe the data for
university
Correct article usage
the university
lecture
write down the given pie graphs Fix the agreement mistake
lectures
show
the nutritional consistency of two dinners.
Wrong verb form
showing
Overalll
, the graph illustrates Correct your spelling
Overall
about
the Change preposition
apply
Medium
Baked Potato
and Macaroni which consists of carbohydrates
, Protein, Glucose
15 percentage
, Saturated fat and other nutrients
.
To begin
with, Medium
Baked Potato
which have
five ingredients Wrong verb form
has
firstly
Carbohydrates
which as
major Correct your spelling
a
share
of 35 per cent
, secondly
protein which is the second largest percentage
share
of 25 per
Correct your spelling
per cent per cent
cent
, thirdly
Glucose
as its percentage
of 15, Saturated fat 10 per cent
and Other Nutrients
15 percentage
.
On otherside
, Macaroni which as Replace the word
the other hand
carbohydrates
which as
is 52 per Correct word choice
apply
cent
share
, Protein as its 11 per cent
, and
Correct word choice
apply
Glucose
also
as its 11 per cent
, Other nutrients
as its 5 percentage
of share
and finally
Saturated fat as
21 per Correct your spelling
is
cent
. Comparitively
, after analysing Correct your spelling
Comparatively
the
both Remove the article
apply
Carbohydrates
as its
large Correct pronoun usage
their
share
, Glucose
as its 15 per cent
in Medium
Baked Potato
and in
Macaroni as its 11 per Change preposition
apply
cent
and nutrients
as its high in Medium
Baked Potato
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Vocabulary: Replace the words medium, potato, carbohydrates, glucose, percentage, nutrients, share, cent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.
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