The pie graphs show the nutritional consistency of two dinners. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data. You should write at least 150 words.

The pie graphs show the nutritional consistency of two dinners. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data.

You should write at least 150 words.
Describe the data for
university
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the university
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lecture
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lectures
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write down the given pie graphs
show
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showing
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the nutritional consistency of two dinners.
Overalll
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Overall
, the graph illustrates
about
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the
Medium
Baked
Potato
and Macaroni which consists of
carbohydrates
, Protein,
Glucose
15
percentage
, Saturated fat and other
nutrients
.
To begin
with,
Medium
Baked
Potato
which have
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has
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five ingredients
firstly
Carbohydrates
which
as
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a
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major
share
of 35 per
cent
,
secondly
protein which is the second largest
percentage
share
of 25
per
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per cent per cent
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cent
,
thirdly
Glucose
as its
percentage
of 15, Saturated fat 10 per
cent
and Other
Nutrients
15
percentage
. On
otherside
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, Macaroni which as
carbohydrates
which
as
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apply
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is 52 per
cent
share
, Protein as its 11 per
cent
,
and
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Glucose
also
as its 11 per
cent
, Other
nutrients
as its 5
percentage
of
share
and
finally
Saturated fat
as
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is
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21 per
cent
.
Comparitively
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Comparatively
, after analysing
the
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both
Carbohydrates
as
its
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their
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large
share
,
Glucose
as its 15 per
cent
in
Medium
Baked
Potato
and
in
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Macaroni as its 11 per
cent
and
nutrients
as its high in
Medium
Baked
Potato
.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words medium, potato, carbohydrates, glucose, percentage, nutrients, share, cent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "data" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "graphs" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • nutritional consistency
  • carbohydrates
  • proteins
  • fats
  • vitamins
  • minerals
  • fiber
  • proportion
  • component
  • pie graph
  • comparison
  • significant
  • balance
  • healthy
  • dietary choices
  • implications
  • absent
  • presence
  • macro-nutrients
  • micro-nutrients
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