The pie graphs show the nutritional consistency of two dinners. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data. You should write at least 150 words.

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Describe the data for

university

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the university

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lecture

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lectures

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write down the given pie graphs

show

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showing

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the nutritional consistency of two dinners.

Overalll

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Overall

, the graph illustrates

about

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apply

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the

Medium

Baked

Potato

and Macaroni which consists of

carbohydrates

, Protein,

Glucose

percentage

, Saturated fat and other

nutrients

To begin

with,

Medium

Baked

Potato

which have

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has

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five ingredients

firstly

Carbohydrates

which

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major

of 35 per

cent

secondly

protein which is the second largest

percentage

of 25

per

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per cent per cent

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cent

thirdly

Glucose

as its

percentage

of 15, Saturated fat 10 per

cent

and Other

Nutrients

percentage

. On

otherside

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the other hand

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, Macaroni which as

carbohydrates

which

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apply

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is 52 per

cent

, Protein as its 11 per

cent

and

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apply

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Glucose

also

as its 11 per

cent

, Other

nutrients

as its 5

percentage

and

finally

Saturated fat

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21 per

cent

Comparitively

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Comparatively

, after analysing

the

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apply

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both

Carbohydrates

its

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their

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large

Glucose

as its 15 per

cent

Medium

Baked

Potato

and

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apply

show examples

Macaroni as its 11 per

cent

and

nutrients

as its high in

Medium

Baked

Potato

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words medium, potato, carbohydrates, glucose, percentage, nutrients, share, cent with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "data" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "graphs" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.

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6Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
16Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

174 words

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Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

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Topic Vocabulary:

nutritional consistency
carbohydrates
proteins
fats
vitamins
minerals
fiber
proportion
component
pie graph
comparison
significant
balance
healthy
dietary choices
implications
absent
presence
macro-nutrients
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The pie graphs show the nutritional consistency of two dinners. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data. You should write at least 150 words.

We live in a world of technology these days. While the internet brings with it clear advantages, the problem in terms of control and security of information outweighs the advantages. To what extent do you agree?

Today, people in many countries can live and work anywhere they choose, because of improved communication technology and transport. Do the advantages of this phenomenon outweigh the it’s disadvantages?

Some cities have few control over design and construction on housing and office buildings. People think that they are free to choose the design they like. Do you think the advantages outweigh disadvantages?

You have a just won two tickets to a concert and want to invite your friend to go with you. Write letter to your friend. In the letter: Give details about the concert Describe how you won the tickets Explain why you've chosen your friend to go with you