The table below gives information about salaries of secondary/high school teachers in five countries in 2009.

The table below gives information about salaries of secondary/high school teachers in five countries in 2009.
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In table shows information about the
income
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of teachers who are educated in high school in five countries
such
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as
Australia
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, Denmark,
Luxembourg
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, Japan, and Korea in 2009. As can be seen from the table, it is obvious that the highest
income
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of educators is in
Luxembourg
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while
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the lowest in the five countries is
Australia
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. In detail,
Luxembourg
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has the highest
income
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which starts at 28000, and maximum at 132000.
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,
this
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country obtains earnings with 119000 after 15
years
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, and teachers can reach a maximum salary of 30
years
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.
In contrast
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, the lowest educators'
income
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is
Australia
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which maximum with mere 48000, and just starting with 28000.
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, after 15
years
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, they obtained earnings of 48000 which equals Korea. Looking at the details, instructors who work in Japan receive initial revenues of 34000, but after 15
years
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they can receive approximately twice as initialling, accounting for 65000. In conclusion, the highest money paid to teachers in five countries whether in starting
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, earnings after 15
years
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, or maximum revenues, is
Luxembourg
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in contrast
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to
Australia
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "in contrast".
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words income, australia, luxembourg, years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • secondary/high school teachers
  • annual salary
  • gross income
  • net salary
  • cost of living
  • education funding
  • gender pay gap
  • teaching hours
  • years of experience
  • additional qualifications
  • economic indicators
  • average wage
  • currency conversion
  • educational disparities
  • international comparison
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