The table below gives information about salaries of secondary/high school teachers in five countries in 2009.
In table shows information about the
income
of teachers who are educated in high school in five countries such
as Australia
, Denmark, Luxembourg
, Japan, and Korea in 2009. As can be seen from the table, it is obvious that the highest income
of educators is in Luxembourg
while
the lowest in the five countries is Australia
.
In detail, Luxembourg
has the highest income
which starts at 28000, and maximum at 132000. Also
, this
country obtains earnings with 119000 after 15 years
, and teachers can reach a maximum salary of 30 years
. In contrast
, the lowest educators' income
is Australia
which maximum with mere 48000, and just starting with 28000. Then
, after 15 years
, they obtained earnings of 48000 which equals Korea.
Looking at the details, instructors who work in Japan receive initial revenues of 34000, but after 15 years
they can receive approximately twice as initialling, accounting for 65000.
In conclusion, the highest money paid to teachers in five countries whether in starting income
, earnings after 15 years
, or maximum revenues, is Luxembourg
in contrast
to Australia
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