The chart below shows the level of mathematics graduates and all alumni, who found a full day's line of work after moving on from a college in Australia, and in addition to the generals of both types of graduates from 2004 to 2012 Compensation shown. And think about choosing the main highlights and declaring where applicable.

The chart below shows the level of mathematics graduates and all alumni, who found a full day's line of work after moving on from a college in Australia, and in addition to the generals of both types of graduates from 2004 to 2012 Compensation shown. And think about choosing the main highlights and declaring where applicable.
The given diagram and table provide quantitative data about the percentage of full workers holding a university degree and the average salary, between Australian college mathematics graduates and all
alumni
, from 2004 to 2012.
Overall
, the line chart compares the portion of
math
degree holders to all, on a 2-year basis,
in addition
to the table that does the same but for the average compensation. For the observed 8 years, the
math
degree holders performed better than general
alumni
in finding a full day's line of work.
Furthermore
, the same group averaged higher salaries starting from 2008 to 2012. In 2004, approximately 64% of Australian college
alumni
found full-day work,
while
math
graduates did it better at 80%. Despite expanding for the next 4 years around 10% to 25%, both populations recorded the same percentage in 2012. From the salary perspective,
math
grads averaged the same take-home pay with
overall
alumni
in 2004 and 2006, respectively at
USD
41k and USD43k.
However
, for the next 6 years, the salary of
math
graduates increased from
USD
15K to
USD
56K in 2012 compared to all
alumni
at
USD
51K.
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