The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make compatisons where relevant.

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The maps illustrate the development of the village of

Ryemouth

Correct your spelling

Tynemouth

between 1995 and now.

Overall

, the fishing port has existed, the

darmland

Correct your spelling

farmland

was replaced by the golf area and

forest

Correct article usage

the forest

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park

was

deforestated

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deforested

deforestation

by tennis places,

many

Correct word choice

and many

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houses

are

Wrong verb form

have been

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added.

According to

the maps show the northwest of Reymouth had few houses in 1930 but now houses are more located.

The

Correct article usage

apply

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Southwest

place

Capitalize word

Place

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had

shop

Add an article

a shop

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but now

this

name changed by the restaurant and under the shop had

fish

Correct article usage

a fish

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market but now it has

few

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a few

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apartments. The fishing port has existed. The north-east had the farmland, it

replaced

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was replaced

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by the golf area and the forest area under the farmland was eliminated by the forest

park

. The south-east had the hotel and it

does

Wrong verb form

did

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not change anything but added with car

park

Under the

Change preposition

The

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car

park

does

Verb problem

has

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not

change

Wrong verb form

changed

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anything and now

also

Rephrase

apply

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has

Verb problem

is also

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the same place.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words park with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 3 times.

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
18Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

147 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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