The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO,) emissions per person ni the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO,) emissions per person ni the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
The graph provides information on the average per capita carbon dioxide
emissions
of four countries from 1967 to 2007.
Overall
,
it is clear that
while
the UK has the highest average CO2
emissions
, Sweden's
output
has fallen over the same period. ​At the same time, people in Italy and Portugal showed a significant rise in their
emissions
levels. In 1967, UK production led to the highest levels of pollution, resulting in approximately 11 metric
tonnes
of CO2 per person
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The next highest emitters were the Swedes, responsible for around 8.5
tonnes
per person, which is two times the average Italian
output
and 16 times the average Portuguese
output
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The UK's CO2
output
has fallen gradually over the past 40 years, but despite a surge in 1970, people in Sweden
also
cut their
emissions
dramatically until 2007
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They account for only 5 metric tons each.
By contrast
, after 1967,
emissions
from Italy and Portugal increased
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At the end
of the given period, Italy was the second highest polluter, with about 8 metric
tonnes
,
while
in Portugal,
although
it was still the lowest emitter
along with
Sweden, just under 6 metric
tonnes
were produced per person.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words emissions, output, tonnes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.

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