Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In the contemporary epoch, a colossal number of plants and

animal

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animals

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are on the verge of extinction. There are multiple reasons that

contribite

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contribute

to the loss of wild species and cause disturbance in the

ecosystem

cycle

due to

overconsumption of natural resources. Many people opine that it is the primary concern when it comes to environmental issues.

However

, my firm conviction is that there are more vital problems

such

as floods and global warming. To commence with, many individuals, especially those who are more

environmentaly

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environmentally

friendly, argue that

loss

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the loss

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of plants and animal habitats that disrupt the

ecosystem

,

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are some environmental problems we need to pay attention

.

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In other words

,

due to

the unpleasant surroundings, many animals and plants are dying today. To illustrate an example, chemical wastes of many factories will be dumped in the

oceaons

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oceans

ocean

and

this

will harm the aquatic creatures and many fishes will be extinct. All these creatures contribute towards a stable

acosystem

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ecosystem

and their extinction can be detrimental to the

ecosystem

cycle.

Conversely

, many individuals believe that other environmental concerns

such

as global warming

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,

air

pollution and drought are major problems that are quintessential factors to be focused on. With significant

air

pollutants, society is more prone to deadly diseases like aspiratory illnesses, lung cancer,

athsma

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asthma

and so forth.

Furthermore

, not only humans but almost all the existence in the world are equally affected.

For instance

, carbon

emitions

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emissions

in

air

and litter in

warter

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water

bodies are harmful to living beings.

Additionally

, global warming and

flood

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floods

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have the power

of harming

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a large number of living things. In conclusion, it is true that

wild life

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wildlife

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is an important part of the

ecosystem

and individuals need to draw urgent attention to retain the natural resources, but from my point of view, some crucial factors like

air

pollutants and climate change are more alarming. If these issues

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controlled, it will minimise the loss of

habitants

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habitats

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of particular wildlife species as well.