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The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
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The line graph illustrates variations in exports of
wheat
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 3 distinct places between 1984 and 1991. In general, it seems that there were not any good growth signs
of
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wheat
 exports over the period. Canada’s
export
 of
wheat
 was more erratic than
two
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the two
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 remaining sites. Speaking of Australia,
this
 area exported about 15
million
tonnes
 of
wheat
 in 1985
,
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 and increased slightly to 16
million
 next year. After that, the
export
 of
wheat
 decreased gradually until 1989, 1990, and it was steady at 11
millions
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of
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tonnes
. Regarding
European
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the European
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 Community, the
wheat
export
 fluctuated between 13 and 22
million
tonnes
 over the five-year period. It started at 17
millions
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tonnes
 in 1985,
then
 there was a small decline in
export
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exports
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 of 14
million
 in 1986.
This
 place rose steadily in
following
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the following
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 years and hit
at
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21
million
tonnes
 in 1990. As regards Canada, the
export
 of
wheat
 was more erratic than
other
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in other
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 areas over the same period. It varied from 14 to 25
millions
 of
tonnes
. There was a significant
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 in
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the export
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export
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the export
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 of
wheat
 between 1985 and 1989, it hit a peak at 25
million
tonnes
 in 1988.
However
, it dropped noticeably to 14
millions
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million
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tonnes
 in the following year and went up
almost
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 20
million
tonnes
 in 1990.
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