The graph below gives information about the price of bananas in four countries between 1994 and 2004. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.
The line graph
demonstrates
us Verb problem
provides
information
about the cost of bananas in four countries in Change preposition
with information
eight
year period. The data is given in US Correct determiner usage
a
dollars
per kilogram.
Overall
, It is clear from the graph that price
Fix the agreement mistake
prices
are
fluctuated in three countries in the period given, only in the USA it Unnecessary verb
apply
remain
stable with a slight rise in the beginning.
Wrong verb form
remained
Firstly
, the highest price, which is
started from 2 Unnecessary verb
apply
dollars
in 1996 in France and Japan are
Unnecessary verb
apply
oscilliated
andCorrect your spelling
oscillated
reminded
Verb problem
remained
in
the same level in France with a slight increase Change preposition
at
for
50 cents in Japan in 2004 respectively. Change preposition
of
Secondly
, the cost of bananas in Germany began from 1,5 dollars
in 1996, than
it fluctuated in the next four years and stayed between 1,5 and 2 Replace the word
then
dollars
in 2004 respectively. Another interesting fact that
Add a missing verb
is that
,
the lowest price is shown in the US for 1 dollar per kilogram in 1996 with a small growth Remove the comma
apply
for
25 cents and stayed at the same level in the whole period.Change preposition
of
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