research shows that business meetings and training are happening online nowadays do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.

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that online businesses and

trainings

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have many benefits in comparison to

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drawbacks.

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, I

also

believe that internet business and training can save our labour and costs,

however

, it will not work when the network is down and I am going to elaborate

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merits and demerits in the

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essay.

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with, networking businesses can reduce

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labour and costs,

this

is clear that humans can do their jobs in their homes

instead

of travelling to work and meetings.An example to illustrate that would be my native country, 75 per cent of the population

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their business transactions through

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and at least 25% are those who prefer to pay money for transportation to and from their

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places.

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, transacting on websites will save the capital which people can use in their lives.To add on, human beings,

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can not provide more energy if they are practising their gatherings at their homesteads as compared to when they meet in person, since they should wake up early in the morning to catch up the time of graft starts. Despite the advantages of training online, there is one major drawback

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if the network is down, communication will

also

breakdown

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.

Moreover

,

bad

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quality of

internet

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can cause misunderstandings,

for instance

, when they video

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, they

could not

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hear each other

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and even the pictures will be blurry.

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of

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to

delaying

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of

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the meeting or conference.

To conclude

, personally, I believe that e-business is

morely

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more

advantageous

while

, it is

also

expensive.

Thus

, recently,

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advantages outnumbered the disadvantages.