The graph below gives information about the price of bananas in four countries between 1994 and 2004. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

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The graph shows the data regarding the

bananas

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price

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prices

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in the USA, Germany, France and Japan from 1994 to 2004.

Overall

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it is clear that

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the USA had a relatively stable

price

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for

bananas

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from 1994 to 2004. In Japan, the banana

price

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rose gradually regardless of

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the flactuations

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flactuations

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fluctuations

shown.

However

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, in other countries, the

bananas

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price

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was not stable

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during

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the given period.

To begin

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with,

United

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the United

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States is one country which witnessed

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apply

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relative stability in the

price

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bananas

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over a long period of time from 1994 to 2004, and the prices were approximately US1 to slightly just above US1 respectively.

On the contrary

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, Japan is seen to have its banana

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increased

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increase

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gradually from around US2 to about

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apply

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US2.50 from 1994 to 2004 respectively. In other countries like Germany and France, the

price

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bananas

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flactuated

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fluctuated

fluctuate

regularly from 1994 to 2004. These countries witnessed

instabality

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instability

in the

price

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bananas

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over the given period.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words bananas, price with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

158 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Trend
Fluctuate
Increase
Decrease
Stable/Stability
Significant
Gradual
Sharp
Slight
Peak
Plummet
Spike
Level off
Dip
Plateau
Cost
Price
Currency
Decade
Year-on-year
Economic factors
Consumer demand
Inflation
Market forces

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The graph below gives information about the price of bananas in four countries between 1994 and 2004. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people believe that the priority of the government should be to ensure a growing economy. While others believe that the government should focus its efforts on uplifting the less fortunate? Discuss both views.

Some people think that in order to be successful in business one has to study at university, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Traffic congestion is a worldwide problem for urban populations. What are some of the causes of this problem and what measures can be taken to address it? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.