The media should limit how much bad news they report because it discourages people from doing activities which usually involve very little risks. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The availability of unpleasant

news

in the

media

such

as television and

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the internet

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internet

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Internet

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should not be exposed too much since it demotivates

people

from executing daily activities which

have

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has

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bad effects. In

this

essay, I strongly disagree with the statement

due to

some reasons.

Media

should be allowed to report any

news

regardless

unpleasant

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of unpleasant

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materials because it is part of freedom of speech.

Media

is a platform that delivers valid information to society and is supported by the idea of human rights in conveying various opinions.

For instance

, today many journalists in Gaza,

Palestine

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and Palestine

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frequently post horrible

news

such

as babies injured, killed, and buried under the

rubbles

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rubble

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and

this

should be backed since it is the way to show the world what is currently occurring there. Another reason why the

media

should not be restricted to

broadcast

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broadcasting

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awful

news

is because it can help

people

to be careful of their surroundings.

People

tend to be worried

with

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about

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the situations that they observe and witness directly

hence

the existence of unfavorable

news

makes us always aware.

For example

, the case of terrorism will lead to awareness of society to be cautious. Sometimes, terrorists' faces are shown in the

media

As a result

people

may acknowledge the faces and they are able to avoid them. In conclusion,

media

such

as television,

internet

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the internet

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and social networking should not be restricted

due to

freedom of speech in revealing any information and

increase

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increasing

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the awareness of

people

to hinder

such

unfavorable

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unfavourable

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news

that has been published.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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