The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and tow between 1995 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and tow between 1995 and 2010. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates the birthplace rate of
people
in
Australia
and outside
Australia
living in three different
areas
over 15 years.
Overall
, the number of
people
born in and outside
Australia
and living in city
areas
significantly increased.
Moreover
,
this
trend noticeably decreased in rural
areas
and towns. In terms of the area with the highest inhabited, the cities are the most popular places for the citizens, which is marked by increasing population rates who were born in
Australia
from around 50 to above 60.
Likewise
, the societies that were born outside
Australia
considerably increased by about 20. Regarding the other two places with lower rates of population, the number of
people
who were born in
Australia
and living in towns decreased slightly to about 5,
while
the societies who were living in rural
areas
decreased dramatically from around 30 to 15.
On the other hand
, the town area inhabited by
people
who were born outside
Australia
remained steady at 10.
In contrast
, the population in rural
areas
hit a low percentage from 40 to 10.
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