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The bar chart shows information about the favourite subjects of students from two middle schools, school A and school B. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart shows information about the favourite subjects of students from two middle schools, school A and school B. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates the comparison of the popular subjects between two junior high schools.
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, these schools have different preferences in choosing their
favorite
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 field of subjects. Most
students
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 in
School
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 A prefer to select sports.
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, the
favorable
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subject
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 in
School
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 B is
craft
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a craft
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. In
School
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 A, sports
subject
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 has a lot of enthusiasts up to 36
students
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. In the second one, nine
students
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 like
science
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. Followed by social
science
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 which is chosen by six
students
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, and five
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 are selected for language. The lowest selected
subject
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 is drawing. In
School
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 B, drawing is the highest portion that was chosen by 25
students
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. The next popular
subject
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 is language, with the number of
students
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 who were like are 18 people. Followed by social
science
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 which is chosen by 10
students
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, and five
students
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 are like the sport. The
science
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 had at least
interested
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 with only two
students
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.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, school, subject, science with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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