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The graph below shows CO2 emissions for different forms of transport in the European Union. The pie chart shows the percentage of European union funds being spent on different forms of transport.

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The line graph illustrates
carbon
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dioxide
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 emissions for various types of vehicles in the
European
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Union
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.the chart compares the number of
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union
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funds
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 being spent on different forms of vehicles. As can be seen from the graph that the biggest source of
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 emissions is air transports about 370
grams
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 per
passenger
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. The smallest
carbon
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dioxide
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 emitter Are coaches. The largest part of the
European
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Union
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funds
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 is spent on roads about 52 %. First of all Maritime and rail forms of transport produce only 50
grams
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carbon
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dioxide
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.
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 is lower indicator than air,buses and
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 cars respectively.
Passenger
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 cars and buses are average manufacturers. They manufacture 130 and 70
grams
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 of Co2 per
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. Coaches are the lowest figure. They produce 40
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carbon
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dioxide
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 per people.
According to
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 the pie chart 52% of the
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Union
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funds
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 are spent on roads. The second largest part of chart are railways .
European
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Union
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 spend 31% of the all
funds
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 for railways.
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 10 percent for public transport, 3 percent for intermodal,inland wayerway and airports.
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European
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Union
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 spend 4% of their money for ports and unknown costs respectively.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words carbon, dioxide, european, union, funds, grams, passenger with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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