The Diagram below Shows The Recycling Process of Plastics
The diagram illustrates how
the
recycling Correct article usage
apply
unnatural
Correct word choice
apply
are
processed in order to produce a range of plastics. Correct subject-verb agreement
is
Overall
, it is clear that
the man-made linear system of smaller chemical items and bags has been discarded in landfills, while
some chemical goods had
recovered afterWrong verb form
have
used
. The following paragraphs will describe the reprocessing process of Replace the word
use
plastic
waste.
First of all, when the product of plastic
sold out in Add an article
the shop
shop
so that the people Fix the agreement mistake
shops
buyed
for buying and using. Correct your spelling
bought
Following
this
, the jars of plastic
products from people who are buying and using neither has collected to continue the recover process or dumped to bags and rubbish in landfill.
Regarding to recycling method of plastic
, the bottles of plastic
are being collected by colour, size and shape. Next,
the bottles of plastic
are to sorted
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be sorted
in house
and continue with, the bottles of Add a hyphen
in-house
plastic
has
been delivered by truck. And Change the verb form
have
then
, the transform of chemical things are processed in factory. The last
process, the good things of plastic
has been worked in factory to delivering to shop.Submitted by musa.nuwa on
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