The Diagram below Shows The Recycling Process of Plastics

The Diagram below Shows The Recycling Process of Plastics
The diagram illustrates how
the
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recycling
unnatural
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are
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processed in order to produce a range of plastics.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the man-made linear system of smaller chemical items and bags has been discarded in landfills,
while
some chemical goods
had
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recovered after
used
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. The following paragraphs will describe the reprocessing process of
plastic
waste. First of all, when the product of
plastic
sold out in
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the shop
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shop
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so that the people
buyed
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bought
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for buying and using.
Following
this
, the jars of
plastic
products from people who are buying and using neither has collected to continue the recover process or dumped to bags and rubbish in landfill. Regarding to recycling method of
plastic
, the bottles of
plastic
are being collected by colour, size and shape.
Next,
the bottles of
plastic
are to
sorted
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in house
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and continue with, the bottles of
plastic
has
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been delivered by truck. And
then
, the transform of chemical things are processed in factory. The
last
process, the good things of
plastic
has been worked in factory to delivering to shop.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words plastic with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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