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The two pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in Canada in 2005 and 2010. S

The two pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in Canada in 2005 and 2010. S
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Analyzing online
sales
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 across Canadian retail sectors from 2005 to 2010 unveils notable shifts in consumer preferences. 2005
sales
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 distribution: Dominated online
sales
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 at 35%, followed by Home Furnishings exactly a quarter,
Food
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 & Beverage (twenty two
percent
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), and Video Games (eighteen
percent
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). 2010
sales
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 distribution: Electronics & Appliances: Decreased slightly to 30
percent
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 but remained a significant share. Home Furnishings: Experienced a substantial drop to small minority in online
sales
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.
Food
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 & Beverage: Surged to nearly one-
third,
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making a remarkable increase. Video Games: Grew to twenty three
percent
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, showing significant but less pronounced growth compared to the
food
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 sector.
This
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 period witnessed fluctuations in online
sales
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 among sectors, with electronics maintaining prominence, home furnishings declining sharply, and remarkable growth in online
food
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sales
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. These changes reflect evolving consumer behaviors and highlight the increasing importance of online platforms for retail
sales
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, food, percent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • retail sectors
  • online shopping sales
  • significant growth/decline
  • consumer behavior
  • market trends
  • economic factors
  • technological advancements
  • sales percentages
  • emerged
  • evolution
  • notable
  • constancies
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