The two pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in Canada in 2005 and 2010. S
Analyzing online
sales
across Canadian retail sectors from 2005 to 2010 unveils notable shifts in consumer preferences. 2005 sales
distribution: Dominated online sales
at 35%, followed by Home Furnishings exactly a quarter, Food
& Beverage (twenty two percent
), and Video Games (eighteen percent
). 2010 sales
distribution: Electronics & Appliances: Decreased slightly to 30 percent
but remained a significant share. Home Furnishings: Experienced a substantial drop to small minority in online sales
. Food
& Beverage: Surged to nearly one-third,
making a remarkable increase. Video Games: Grew to twenty three percent
, showing significant but less pronounced growth compared to the food
sector. This
period witnessed fluctuations in online sales
among sectors, with electronics maintaining prominence, home furnishings declining sharply, and remarkable growth in online food
sales
. These changes reflect evolving consumer behaviors and highlight the increasing importance of online platforms for retail sales
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