the charts below show the internet use in different purposes in Australia in 2010,2011 and the percentage by users .
The bar charts provide information about Australia's
internet
usage for three different purposes in the years 2010 and 2011.
Overall
, the internet
is mainly used for emailing rather than other purposes and it is used by all age
groups almost the same. However
, social networking showed a downward trend while
banking and bill payment fluctuation among the age
groups.
Moreover
, internet
usage in Australia accounted highest rate for mailing which is 100 while
for other reasons online baking and bill payment encoundered just above 60 and almost the same for social networking usage.
Furthermore
, the age
group 15-24 individuals mostly used
Wrong verb form
use
for
social media platform Change preposition
apply
is
around 90% Unnecessary verb
apply
while
age
above 65 older people only spends about 20%. Meanwhile, the internet
for Capitalize word
Internet
the
financial purposes younger people only used less than 40% but the Correct article usage
apply
age
group 25-34 was the highest among them almost 60%. On the other hand
, the
email is used by almost 80% of every Correct article usage
apply
age
individuals.Submitted by me.sara22 on
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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