Spending money on railways rather than roads is more reasonable for government. Do you agree or disagree?

Some might believe that spending money on

railways

rather than

roads

is a

way

that governments should perform regardless

their

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preferences. When it comes to me, I

am partially agree

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with the idea that utilizing money on

railways

rather than

roads

is not

effective

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method

which is

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lead

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to benefits. One aspect is that implementing more projects to make the

railways

better is superior to spending much money on

roads

. Using

railways

is

precise

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reason that paves the

way

for transferring merchandise and passengers’ movement.

For instance

, products and daily passengers can be moved among distinctive remote places with the help of

railways

.

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governments should prefer to send their goods

through

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trains

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,

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because their authorities know that

this

way

is relatively helpful

to save

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merchandise and

prevent

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different detrimental accidents.

This

can be illustrated by the fact that many terrible road accidents and problems can occur even

in

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off-peak hours.

Road

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system,

on the other hand

, is comparatively available for government authorities and commuters. Travelling and transferring

through

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cars

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and other transportation or other vehicles is probably

fast

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way

that most people firmly

convince

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its

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benefits. To cite an example, cars and buses can move fast from one place to another because of their sizes. Travelling by

roads

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mostly has spread everywhere and it is more famous than the others.

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this

means is

systematic

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project that nobody can claim

it

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is messy despite traffic

jam

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and

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other problems. All things considered, thinking about essential details reveals that travelling

by

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both

roads

and

railways

has its own benefits.