In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies

In some parts of the world, many youths are advised

for working

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or

travelling

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travel

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prior to college.

This

essay will suggest that the experience gained and money saved are the significant benefits, whilst delaying

in

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careers and reducing motivation to study

further

are the prime drawbacks. The important advantages of a Gap

year

are learning about the different cultures and traditions, and earning money.

This

is to say that for learners who have just completed their secondary school,

by

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working or travelling for a

year

could allow them to learn more about beyond the education sector.

In addition

, tertiary education is costly, and many graduates bear

this

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expenses

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themselves by earning

more

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as

possible

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as

in between

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this

year

. To

illustrates

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that, the average student at the

university

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of

USA

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the USA

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requires more than ten thousand dollars per annum to survive.

Therefore

, they saved more money for their future

studies

.

However

, pupils have

delaying

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in their future careers and

also

reduce motivation to study

further

, which are the greatest demerits for students. As job markets are very competitive, an extra

year

means a massive difference whilst applying for job applications for higher

position

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.

Furthermore

, a gap

year

means demotivation to start university

studies

and continue it with full enthusiasm.

For instance

, in the context of Nepal, most of the students discontinued their

study

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studies

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and involved in the same job

as a result

of distraction from

studies

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their studies

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. In conclusion, the advantages of

gap

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year

can be more beneficial for younger people to gain experience and confidence with

lot

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a lot

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of savings.

However

,

delay

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delays

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in their careers and reduction of motivation for

further

studies

could be more disadvantages.