🔶In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. 🔸What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

It is well said that hard

work

is key to success.In many cultures,it is usually said to

offsprings

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that they can achieve their goals if they do hard

work

.There are some merits and demerits of saying

this

to

children

. There are many pros of giving

this

message to pupils.

firstly

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,in

this

competitive era,it is very essential to do hard and smart

work

to complete one's aims.If

children

are taught to

work

hard in their studies,they will be motivated for

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and become successful in their lives.

Secondaly

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Secondly

,if parents do not ask their

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for hard

work

,they may not focus on their subjects and

this

results

into

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low

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performance of kids.If students do

work

hardly

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,they will perform well in their schools and achieve success in future. Moving to the cons of

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trend,

by

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asking

children

to do hard

work

for

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to

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acheiving

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achieve

anything

is

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sometimes

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pressure on their minds.They feel stressed and

do

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work

for longer hours

for

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fullfill

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fulfil

their dreams .But

due to

some reasons,if they fail to achieve their goal ,they feel depressed and

consequently

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this

leads to affect

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their mental health.

Moreover

,in

this

modern era,to complete one's dreams,it is not enough to do only hard

work

,rather than

this

,both hard and smart

work

are required.so it is not beneficial to

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children

to do hard

work

only,

this

only

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their energy.

To conclude

,

although

hard

work

is really important to become successful,

but

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without proper strategies,it is difficult to achieve goals.