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The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002

The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002
#information #consumer #items #five #countries
The table below shows
about
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spending variety of
equipments
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equipment
types of equipment
pieces of equipment
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 by users in 5 different
countries
 in 2002
Overall
 in all
countries
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countries,
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 people consumed food|Tobacco|Drinks with
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a high
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high
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a high
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 percentage,
while
leisure|education
 was less. In Italy people spent the biggest amount
for
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on
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 drinks|food|
smoking
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and smoking
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that
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which
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 was 16.36%.
Clothing|footwear
 was at 9.00%
that
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which
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 was
highest
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the highest
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 in 5 all
countries
.
Leisure|Education
 was the lowest in Italy with 3.20%. In Spain food|drinks|tobacco were used with 18.80%.
However
,
Clothing|footwear
 and
leisure|education
 were less respectively 6.51% and 1.98% . In
sweden
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Sweden
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 food |drink|smoking was 15.77%
that
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which
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 was the lowest in all
countries
in addition
 to
clothing|
footwear
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and footwear
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 was
also
 the lowest.
However
,
leisure|education
 was
avarge
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average
 with 3.22%. In
Turkey
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Turkey,
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 people
spent
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spend
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high
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a high
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 amount
for
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on
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 food|drinks|
tobacco
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and tobacco
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 with 32.14%. In
Sweden
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Sweden,
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 it was consumed with 28.91%.
However
,
clothing|footwear
werw
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were
 almost equal in both
countries
 with 6.43% and 6.63% Leisure| Education was
more
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used twice
in
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much in
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 Turkey than
Sweden
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in Sweden
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. They were 2.21% and 4.35%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words countries, leisure|education, clothing|footwear with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumer spending
  • items
  • countries
  • comparison
  • overview
  • table
  • data
  • information
  • proportion
  • percentage
  • figures
  • categories
  • expenditure
  • purchases
  • spending habits
  • trends
  • average
  • highest
  • lowest
  • variation
  • pattern
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