In many countries, children are becoming overweight and unhealthy. Some people think that the government has the responsibility to solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is a common belief that kids are being overweight and having

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and the

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has to tackle

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issue.

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agree that

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perception is somewhat justifiable,

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still believe that there are other factors that have impacts on our decisions. It is true that the

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could take concrete actions to have healthy and

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for each

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in their schools. First and foremost,

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are still quite young, so they do not have enough knowledge and finances to pay attention to a nutritious diet, they only eat what is given to them by their

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and adults.

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, the

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needs to make policies to support schools with doctors providing regular dietary

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for individual development.

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, the

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could reduce taxes and prices for healthy products so people could buy more to serve a quality life.

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, in America, fast

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is usually more expensive than healthy

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, so people with financial difficulties or expanded families often buy fast

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for their

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, so they always are

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overweight.

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,

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would argue that the

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themselves and their

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are responsible for

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issue because of several reasons. Chief among these is that

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are the people who understand their

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better than ever.

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, they are the ones who buy and allow their

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to eat mainly in a day so they need to know exactly what is good for them. The second reason is that

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themselves prefer things that appeal to their taste rather than things that are good for health and weight,

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as candy and fast

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. If they cannot control what they eat, not only will it increase their weight, but

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cause dangerous diseases later on. In conclusion,

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it is irrefutable that their

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and the

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themselves need to be responsible for controlling weight quickly and eating unhealthy foods, the

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should be responsible in

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matter.