The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph provided information about
copper
, nickel
and zinc
price changes per month during a year
. In brief, Nickel
had the most change in 2014 with ups and downs and in order Zinc
and Copper
with a smooth change but almost similar prices between January and the last
month of the year
.
Looking at the graph closely, it is significant to note that Nickel
had a huge decrease in price during 2014 but mostly in the first 3 months of the year
although
it was not the only peak of
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it
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Nickel
had its lowest price in June however
, by the end of the year
it had fixed income.
Furthermore
, we have Copper
and Zinc
to take a look at, which both had close
start in January with 2% and 1% in order, even though they had little changes they are different in details. Add an article
a close
the close
Zinc
started the year
with an increase in its costs but it picked -1% twice in a year
, one in June and the other in October. Additionally
, for
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Copper
, they
had drops in their prices by the end of the first 4th months and smoothly established themselves to reach 1.5% in December which is almost close to Correct pronoun usage
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zinc
with 2%.
Tu sum up, Nickle had the most changes and cut
off in their costs starting at 6% in January but ending with 1% unlike, the other 2 metals which passed 12 months without a huge difference from the way they started the Verb problem
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year
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