Your local newspaper published an advertisement asking people to help with environment projects in your area. Write a letter to a project manager to offer your help. In your letter - Describe a local environmental issue that affects you. - Explain what you would like to do help. - And suggest how the problem could be avoided in future.

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to you in respect of the advertisement published
last
week Sunday 11th asking for help with environmental projects. I am delighted to volunteer to help. Over the recent years, there has been
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of refuse on the streets and drainages leading to blockage.
This
has caused serious flooding in the area during
rainy
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season. To arrest
this
situation
therefore
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, I
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like to organise youths in the area and clean out drainages at least once a month. Together, we will ensure all areas are rid of refuse. Thinking ahead,
this
situation can be prevented by
government
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providing covered drainages to avoid blockage
as well as
sensitizing the community against emptying refuse into existing gutters. I look forward to helping save the environment. Yours Faithfully, Eseosa Ebhohimen
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