More and more people are relying on their private cars as a major means of transportation. Describe some of the problems over resilience on cars can cause and suggest atleast one possible solution.
These days, many people
use
private cars more than another
Correct quantifier usage
other
transportation
types like public transportation
or use
trains. But if every person starts to use
his own car
, it will lead to many environmental issues. In this
essay, I will describe some problems and solutions.
Firstly
, there are many benefits if a person relies on to use
his own car
. For instance
, if someone uses public transportation
like Uber every day, they will spend a lot of money. Moreover
, but also
has many problems when everyone starts to use
his private car
. In fact, when the person uses his car
every day the carbon dioxide will increase and this
leads to harmful to the environment.
On the other hand
, there are a lot of solutions to decrease problems one of them is making a discount fee on public transportation
and diversifying means of transportation
such
as trains and buses. In addition
, they can also
use
electric bases or cars to limit carbon dioxide. Furthermore
, when using alternative sources they have a big good effect on climate change.
In conclusion, I think we should start to use
electric cars or bases and this
thing we have a good life. The alternative source is the good future for all the world.Submitted by Eissa Aljabri
on
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