Wealthy nations should assist poorer countries with humanitarian relief during natural disasters. Do you agree or disagree?
It is generally believed that industrialized
countries
should provide humanitarian assistance to underdeveloped countries
in the event of natural disasters. This
essay agrees with this
view because of the power that rich countries
have and
to improve their political significance.
Correct word choice
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Firstly
, wealthy countries
should assist less privileged countries
because they can not afford rebuilding
by themselves. Having a little profit or even a loss every yearChange the verb form
to rebuild
,
makes Remove the comma
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nations
not ready for the unexpected events that affect them negatively like natural disasters. With the financial or materialistic help of rich countries
, they can return to their lives again. For instance
, it can be noticed the situation after the earthquake in 1964 in Tashkent. Lack of money in the government,
did not give a way to return to ordinary life in the city. But with the financial help of the Russian government, it returned.
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Secondly
, authority in a political area is not a simple thing to obtain and it can be gained by showing humanity and helping undeveloped countries
. When human beings help others in a difficult situation, it automatically gives more respect from
viewers. Change preposition
to
Helping
side will be believed and will be helped Correct article usage
The helping
also
by others in their tough situations. In a political area, it will improve the intersection between nations
. Again, the earthquake disaster in Tashkent can be shown as an example. After the humanitarian aid of the Russian government, all country borders were opened.
To conclude
, developed countries
should assist with humanitarian aid to less developed countries
because poor nations
can not afford rebuilding
and return to their ordinary life. Change the verb form
to rebuild
Moreover
, it will help to improve rich nations
' importance in the political area.Submitted by shakhzodbek.bakhtiyorov on
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