IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 7.5

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
The bar graph provides an insight into the annual income of households in the United States for the years 2007, 2011, and 2015.
Overall
Linking Words
, the lowest earned income in the three annuals was $75000–$99999 by less than half of the individuals. Though $100,000 was earned
by
Change preposition
as
show examples
 a significant amount, it proceeds to increase over time showing a positive trend.
To begin
Linking Words
 with, In the year 2007, $25000 and less was earned by nearly 25
million
Use synonyms
people
Use synonyms
,
whereas
Linking Words
people
Use synonyms
 earning $100,000 were the highest at about 30
million
Use synonyms
 households earning the amount.
In addition
Linking Words
, 2011 saw 30
million
Use synonyms
 earnings between $25,000 and $49999.
Along with
Linking Words
 that, Nearly 13
million
Use synonyms
people
Use synonyms
 earn between $75,000 and $99,999
Moreover
Linking Words
, in 2015, the statistics show that the highest salary earned was $100,000 and more by 33,000
million
Use synonyms
people
Use synonyms
. The least amount received was $75,000–$99,999, which, in comparison to the previous years, increased to 15
million
Use synonyms
 households.

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Vocabulary: Replace the words million, people with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
▼
Topic Vocabulary:
  • household distribution
  • income brackets
  • annual income
  • percentage change
  • trend analysis
  • income group
  • significant increase/decrease
  • steady growth/decline
  • fluctuations
  • compared to
  • in contrast
  • notably
  • median income
  • poverty line
  • economic factors
What to do next:
Look at other essays: