The chart below shows the number of travellers using three major airports in New York City between 1995 and 2000.
The bar chart illustrates information about the amount of visitors in three airports in New York in
five
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a
year
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five-year
period
. The size of people
is measured in millions per year.
Overall
, as it can be seen the number of people
in Newark and LaGuardia had a substantial growth during the period
given. However
, the volume of passengers in John F. Kennedy fluctuated.
In detail, LaGuardia had the highest amount of passengers in the period
and started from about 35 million
people
in 1995 and reached a peak in 2000 of 69 million
, repectively
. The same Correct your spelling
respectively
tednency
can be found in Newark, which Correct your spelling
tendency
was
began from 15 Unnecessary verb
apply
million
in 1995, then
it is
almost doubled in 1997 with a slight rise Unnecessary verb
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for
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of
million
people
in
the end of Change the preposition
at
period
. The Add an article
the period
amount
of visitors Change the quantifier
number
in
John F. Kennedy fluctuated significantly and started from 25 Change preposition
to
million
in 1995, then
it
reached a peak in 1997 of about 48 Correct pronoun usage
apply
million
. Than
it fell to 31 Replace the word
Then
million
in 1999 with a jump in 2000 for about 10 million
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