The bar chart below shows current health expenditure totals as percentages of GDP* for various European countries for the years 2002, 2007 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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Given bar chart shows the trend of
a
spending on healthcare as percentages of GDP for 12 European countries for the Remove the article
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years
2002, 2007 and 2012.
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Overall
, it is noticeable that the highest expenditures are registered in Switzerland for all three Linking Words
years
. Use synonyms
On the contrary
, Estonia, Lithuania and Poland have Linking Words
less
proportions in comparison with others.
Belgium, Denmark and Norway had the same figures in 2012, but Belgium stayed unchangeable at 10%, Correct word choice
lower
while
Denmark and Norway increased by about 1%. Estonia remained stable at about 3%, Linking Words
while
Lithuania had almost double of Estonia's figure, but Linking Words
grow
slightly over the Wrong verb form
grew
years
. Poland and Slovenia Use synonyms
also
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has
the same history but with higher figures Change the verb form
have
by
1% and 3% respectively. Luxembourg has the opposite history: the rate decreased by 1% in the Change preposition
of
last
year. France had Linking Words
fluctuated
rates. After a slight up and noticeable down, it Replace the word
fluctuating
located
at about 9% in 2012. The figures Add a missing verb
was located
of
Switzerland remained stable for all 3 Change preposition
for
years
at about 11%Use synonyms
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