The bar chart below shows current health expenditure totals as percentages of GDP* for various European countries for the years 2002, 2007 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows current health expenditure totals as percentages of GDP* for various European countries for the years 2002, 2007 and 2012.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Given bar chart shows the trend of
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spending on healthcare as percentages of GDP for 12 European countries for the
years
2002, 2007 and 2012.
Overall
, it is noticeable that the highest expenditures are registered in Switzerland for all three
years
.
On the contrary
, Estonia, Lithuania and Poland have
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proportions in comparison with others. Belgium, Denmark and Norway had the same figures in 2012, but Belgium stayed unchangeable at 10%,
while
Denmark and Norway increased by about 1%. Estonia remained stable at about 3%,
while
Lithuania had almost double of Estonia's figure, but
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slightly over the
years
. Poland and Slovenia
also
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the same history but with higher figures
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1% and 3% respectively. Luxembourg has the opposite history: the rate decreased by 1% in the
last
year. France had
fluctuated
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rates. After a slight up and noticeable down, it
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at about 9% in 2012. The figures
of
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Switzerland remained stable for all 3
years
at about 11%
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Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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