The table shows the worldwide market share of the mobile phone market for manufactures in the years 2005 and 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table shows the worldwide market share of the mobile phone market for manufactures in the years 2005 and 2006.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table displays the global selling of the mobile market for various manufacturers in two different years: 2005 and 2006.
Overall
, the data provides information about Nokia, Motorola and Samsung sales, which are the largest.
Also
, the companies,
such
as Sony Ericsson, L.G, BenQ Mobile and others have less amount of selling, compared to the
last
three manufacturers.
Firstly
, Nokia had the biggest percentage of market share among other companies in both years, at approximately 30% in 2005 and 35% in 2006. Motorola has the second hugest portion, which is nearly 17% and merely over 21% in 2005 and 2006, respectively. Samsung
also
, has a quite good percentage, at around 12% in both given terms.
Secondly
, Sony and LG have similar parts, at roughly 6%.
Nevertheless
, BenQ Mobile company has part slightly less, than the previous two.
In addition
, other companies share a great portion, at a bit more than 19% in the first year and about 16% in the second shown year.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Market share
  • Manufacturers
  • Annual comparison
  • Dominate
  • Fluctuate
  • Decline/Dip
  • Increase/Surge/Growth
  • Rank/Ranking
  • Competitive landscape
  • Significant
  • Percentage points
  • Emerging players
  • Market exit
  • Overall trend
  • Comparison
  • Dynamics
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