the chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The tables shows the percentage in each category of exports in 2016 compared to 2015

the chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The tables shows the percentage in each category of exports in 2016 compared to 2015
The graph gives information about the comparison of export earnings for five items between 2015 and 2016.
Overall
, it can be seen that almost all categories had increased value throughout the period.
On the other hand
, there is only one category that has gone down. In terms of total revenue for a year, petroleum and engineered goods had earned above $50 billion,
while
the other three products namely gems and
jewelry
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, agricultural, and textiles had a lower value between around $20 to $40 billion.
According to
the report given in the table, the percentage rate of textiles is the most in-demand items which had significantly increased up to 15.24% and become the highest value changes. In the second one, engineered goods production was up as much as 8.5%, followed by petroleum which contributed to increasing export proceeds at 3%.
Moreover
, the agricultural had little effect with
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increased
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slightly at 0.81%. In sharp contrast to
this
, the gems and
jewelry
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had decreased considerably in
rate
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of values 5.18%.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Exports, categories, value, goods, services
  • Trends, increase, decrease, percentage, compared
  • Significant, minimal, fluctuation, remained stable
  • Domestic product, international trade, economic indicators
  • Manufacturing, agriculture, technology, textiles
  • Revenue, economic growth, trade deficit
  • Forecast, predict, anticipate, implications
  • Global market, exchange rate, competitiveness
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